a man cut in slices
#157
Posted 03 April 2016 - 09:59 AM
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#158
Posted 04 April 2016 - 10:09 AM
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Posted 04 April 2016 - 08:31 PM
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Posted 04 April 2016 - 08:42 PM
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Posted 07 April 2016 - 10:03 AM
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#163
Posted 11 April 2016 - 01:46 AM
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#164
Posted 13 April 2016 - 03:21 AM
... after about 25 minutes, it dawned on me that he had my wallet, my galaxy phone, all my credit cards, he pulled a fucking runner, hes gone hes got all my shit and ill never see him again, all my cash, about 100,000 baht. I couldnt believe it, he knows id never go to the police, it was the perfect time, it was to easy, it was a softball, im going home in a few days anyway, this loves never gonna last. I couldnt believe he would do this. I felt an avalanche of betrayal crashing down on me. The dissapointment made me sick to my stomach. The lights and the traffic made me dizzy. What was i going to do, no money no passaport, ....
If you are writing the truth here, and its a big IF, then I think you want to be fucked over. Just have it done with so you can stop the agony and the hurting love. Pull it togheter man.
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#165
Posted 16 April 2016 - 03:11 AM
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#166
Posted 16 April 2016 - 01:58 PM
You've become quite poetic yung havok! You could probably publish your story as an e-book and sell some copies!
Regardless of that, it you've wrote some gripping scenes - particularly about your fear of betrayal - yet you didn't follow up with how you felt after realizing your gf did not abandon you and take all your money and passport.
Looking forward to more!
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#167
Posted 20 April 2016 - 02:24 AM
Looking forward to more!
Me too!
#168
Posted 20 April 2016 - 02:16 PM
yeah, gripping...like the girlfirend's ass
I want to see this girl who you consitantly refer to as "he".
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